JC

it's weird having faces for everybody now!!!! AHH!! Now, just so I can inflict the same weird feeling on you all... Below would be me playing my guitar!!! The real ...

P.S- Happy Birthday!

CAPS BUG DONT THEY???? WHEN YOU SEE THEM ON A PAGE, YOU JUST ZERO IN ON THEM, UNTIL YOU CANT CONCENTRATE ON THE ACTUAL story BUT WHAT'S DIFFERENT ABOUT THE ...

AH! Just when you thought I had something against boxes!!!! The boy dropped me on the ground, and although it hurt, I managed to shrink away from him on the ...

Really isn't much I can say that hasn't already been said. So, I guess I'll go with my thoughts on the story...seeing as that's what a critique is right??? Now, ...

:!: I enjoy critiques, reads, more or less anything that has to do with feedback from readers! :!: Chapter 7- Punishment and Chocolate It's a weird thing to think about, ...

10/10 For two reasons, one coffee is amazing!!! and two, nobody seems to be able to rate above a 5! teehee =)

It's kinda like, YA for people who don't particularly like YA. Basically its about this parasite, that creates Peeps, which are actually vampires, only the carriers (who have the parasite ...

Peeps is a really good book by the author of the Uglies trilogy. It's basically about this guy who carries a parasite that gives people vampirism. It's really intresting and ...

6/10 Cuz I had to read it twice for it to make sense, but when it did I giggled a little in my head =)

:!: PG-13 for slight language and topic of discussion. Oh, and squared doesn't mean repeated, or anything like that, it means that this chapter is told from the same view ...

you see, the problem is, I dont know quite where this belongs in the rest of the story....which makes it hard for me to read...

this section is really, really short. You might want to add in some dialouge between Chris and Rob, to show how detached from them Jaimy feels, or a conversation between ...

“I feel ill,” I let my eyes wander across his face, deliberately letting him know that he was the source of my sudden illness. Rob nudged my leg under the ...

“No, no im happy here now,”. the im, should be like this- I'm, no matter what part of the sentence it comes in. and my normal thing with the period ...