JC

Awww...sadness. Tell me when you put it back up! Kay, I look forward to reading it!!!! -JC

My name is Erakigrasto, but you can call me Coal as all the other humans do. I wasn't even going to try pronouncing his real name, so I started referring ...

"So," he said shortly. "So what?" I snapped back at him. She really does have anger problems huh? He simply melted through the bark and melted back through the other ...

I only call her Sappy. "I only call her Sappy," and "Only I call her Sappy," have two different meaning. See it? “Oh, your into that are you?” You're “Lets ...

“So, your not going to be good,” , should be a . you got it right in all the others, 'cept this one. I hated to think his bastard was ...

We sat on the school field, tugging at the grass. We hated P.E, we really did, but in some ways it was the best because we got to muck around. ...

“I have to go home,” And with those words... The A in and should be lowercase. “Ok…talk to you later then, call you Saturday or something bye!”. I know old ...

“Your just so cute..." Should be you're I like this, once again, muchos too short, but I still love where you're taking the story. I agree with Alainna, there could ...

Oh, yeah. Most chapter's only change like three times at the very most. I'm trying to keep it like, one change per chapter, depending on lengh and such. The title ...

Yeah, I crit a lot of stuff. Mostly things that nobody have critted yet, if its a popular story, I tend not to reply to it, just because they have ...

Last year (freshmen year), my class read Lord of the Flies. I wasn't really looking forward to it, and unfortunately I wasn't at school for the week they were reading ...

Anthropomorphism. Wow...BIG word!! hehe. I should add that to my vocabulary...and keep it. It's just that impressive. As for Animal Farm, I've read it. Knowing before hand what it was ...

Hmmm...let's start this party with some boxes!!!! this little tale; He was desperate for a way out... Incorrect use of the semicolon! The semicolon has two main purposes: 1. It ...

Hey, I'm writing a novel, Philosophy of the Dark. Chances are you've seen it here, maybe you've even looked at it. I am in desperate need of critiques, of which ...

:!: Philosophy of the Dark- Chapter 8. Mild use of language. :!: - Patterns that look like swirls -but are really just dust in the dark -On both accounts. That's ...