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Oh, okay, I'll see what I can do then =D

A cool thing to do when you have writers block, or can't think about what to write about is to take a picture and make it a story. I mean, ...

But really ,was it was her who was in... typo error thing, just thought I would point it out for yah =D You reallyl like the name Chris don't you??? ...

*High fives!* That's awesome, congrats dude!!!!! =D

“He doesn't know I'm still writing it,” Jamie said, quiet as ever into her lap. And I may just be having an off day, but that sentance doesn't seem to ...

Another section to love, though it ended quite abruptly (I love the last line by the way). The first paraghraph could be broken up into smaller sections. But I still ...

:!: Philosophy of the Dark- Chapter 13 :!: Chapter 13 -The difference between life and death -On both accounts The difference between life and death is that life has a ...

Then I shot up in bed realizing I was no longer in Syradrum. The bed was my own, covered in pale yellow sheets and surrounded by white washed furniture. Try ...

It does, thank you very much

Well, there were no errors that I could find, so that's a good things right there. Also I love the characters you introduce,they seem so real. It's like, you've created ...

Jamiy and then the 'seeing' Jamiy teehee, Jamie, Jaimy...I love our characters names. =D Thanks muchos for the comments!

Good point about the jokes...I'll see what I can do, but I would really like to keep them in...any suggestions???

I'm not sure if I'm keeping this chapter... I have to think about what it does to the story. I'm afraid that I might have gone over the top here.

DUDE! Another person who reads them!!! I love you!!!! teehee!

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