JC

Thanks again for reading it! If you ever want me to read something of yours just tell me. :) -JC

AHH!!!! I can't stand his writing!!!! In this I don't think I'm alone, but I do want to know what everybody actually thinks about him... *walks of with angry thoughts ...

Ahh, I'm thinking about going on a 7th Harry Potter Book strike, just because all my friends are so into it...I don't understand...honestly, I don't like her style, for the ...

My best advice would be, write something you're passionate about. If you don't like fantasy, don't write about dragons. Write something you would want to read. And if you start ...

As he stood behind his desk day dreaming the ringing of the gold bell on his desk sounded loudly. The noise snapped him out of his trance. There before him ...

Well, I've been at YWS for a while, and obviously, I'm a writer. Hmm...well, I was born in France, and lived there until I was seven, at which point I ...

OHH! A band person!!!! I'm in band, have been...well forever. Of course in high school it's way better! Stick to it, field shows are amazing!!!!!! Yeah, I played flute for ...

but there was nothing but the small breeze Using but in such close proximety can confuze the reader, or at least make them pause in their reading, like deja vu. ...

Ne -infinative- pas. Except in some rare casses =D -JC

Yeah, were should be was, who's should be whose, and loose should be lose....the result of typing quickely =D Thanks for pointing those out, I'll fix them! Once agian, thanks ...

hehe, thank you Miya, I really appreciate you reading all of these =D hehe, you spelled her name Jaimy =D it makes me giggle that our characters have the same ...

:!: Philsophy of the Dark Chapter 23 -Faded -On both accounts :!: I never expected to end up here, on the outside looking in. Like my very own words my ...

:!: Philosophy of the Dark Chapter 22 squared -Consequential solitude -and unwanted knowledge :!: She left that night, after her mom was asleep. The night was cold, the almost winter ...

hehe, some of my lines get all the way!!!! Yeah, but about the language...I agree, it was getting a little gratuitus, but it was kind-of...well, fitting to the story, and ...

:!: Philosophy of the Dark- Authors note: I've decided to start censoring the language a bit, just here though. The origionals are full out though =D Enjoy!!!! :!: Chapter 22 ...