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Following the disposal of empty boxes, I decided I’d reward myself with a steaming hot bubble bath to wash away the tension in my screaming muscles and ease the awkwardness ...

Philosophy of the Dark Chapter 25 -Silence -On both accounts Just when you think you can trust somebody to the very core of your being, they turn. Maybe you should ...

I think it's that I used however twice, I fixed it earlier, just not here yet...hehe =D Thanks for reading Alainna, I really appreciate it! -JC

This is just like the worst possible beginning line...only different!!!! So...I'll go first... "Thats my story!"

I am also a fantasy writer. You should join the fantasy fools usergroup, it's really awesome! I've written one fantasy book, Illusions, it was the first in a series. But ...

Wow...that's really abstract...which is not saying I didn't like it, but I didn't fully understand it...hehe. It was really well written! =D Good job! -JC

Chapter 24 -The first symptoms Jamie drove home by habit, barely even looking at the road. She was mad, upset, sad, and every emotion in between. She walked as quietly ...

While most of us know what to do with double quotation marks, you know, dialogue, it's single quotation marks that confuse us. Single quotation marks can be used with dialogue ...

Original preservation inhibitor (OPI) Because it can be abbriviated, I assume it's a name for something, capitalize the P and the I as well. I think, chances are I'm wrong, ...

Wow...I liked this, your writing is very good, though there's always room for improvement Suggestions: This so far seems heartless, and I know it's early on and creating clones isn't ...

Crit for crit??? Sure! hehe, actually, I'll read your stuff just for fun, because I'm (and this used to be a scary though to me) getting into science fiction...and I've ...

*Sing's you a welcoming song* Welcome to YWS!!!! I'm JC (obviously hehe) and if you ever need anything feel free to send me a message/PM (which is actually the same ...

Thanks! That's awesome to hear =D

Alaska's amazing, like a writers haven. There are so many just beautiful scenes around, all these tree's, it's where I get a lot of my scenes. And contrary to popular ...

Okay, we've all done it. Started a story that was supposed to be really good, got really hyped about it, daydreamed about the day it would get published, who would ...