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6/10 not very origional...but I like cats...and it rhymes with hats

Philosophy of the Dark Chapter 27 -To say or not to say She was at the lake, sitting at the end of the dock when footsteps approached her. “Hey Jamie,” ...

Philosophy of the Dark Chapter 26 -This Calling -On both accounts The rest of breakfast was silent and quick. Tammy didn't open the briefcase, and Jamie didn't give her any ...

A man, and I won't say who, once told me "You have to stop trying to live for everybody else, they have their own lives to take care of." I ...

Yeah, the unabridged. I don't know, I just think that if a writer is going to spend that much of his life working on a piece that ends up being ...

This was MY territory, not its. Normally you have IT capatalized, to avoid having two capatalized words in one sentece, try this: This was my territory, not IT's. haha, that ...

Oops, yeah, forgot the link. *blushes* (and about the ton temps, I used it because I was talking to the reader directly at the time of the reading. Also, I ...

Wow. Thanks tremendously, *can't help smiling* I don't know how many times I've said this, but I really appreciate all of the help, and critiques, and such. Just, thank you. ...

Yeah, me too...but maybe because I learned the american way...who knows. But I've read some stuff where it was different, and it just seemed...empty! I didn't like it as much, ...

So, I just finished reading Les Miserables. I started reading the unabridged version in eighth grade, then gave up, then started again, then gave up. You get the picture. Anyways, ...

My fate...or my choices...I still don't really know the difference. ~Jamie (POD) If you could be any animal, what would it be? and why?

I know, this is getting repeditive by to avoid being cliche.... What's up??? (I don't think anybody's asked that one yet!!! hehe) So, now to the...said stuff. Welcome to YWS!!! ...

Information comes from Writersblock.com. See Clau's link! Here's the history!!!! A couple of decades ago, no writer for the general public would dream of addressing the reader directly by using ...

My name’s Sarah she said could you give me a ride home I’m in no shape to drive. My mom’s going to kill me. This should be in quotation marks, ...

Let me take you to the hospital. This should either be dialogue or you just swutched to second person, eithr way, it's weird. You need to call the police. Ditto. ...