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I always like d those words, somehow. Like I could get them in my bones and stretch them out Your footsteps are the light ones, in long boots and sometimes ...

Words With Which We Say, Goodbye It is with these words that I fare thee, not well, for what the morrow brings will soon come regardless of my sympathy . ...

Oboe: She said she was going for an American view in the story. Football has to be soccar, or it's English, not American. I understand the dfference between Football and ...

I really liked this. It seemed true and flowed very well, of course some of the wording wasn't perfect in places, but things hardly are. I loved the basis of ...

I get it that you're trying to write your own story, but the coincidence is a little off-putting, if you would like to call it completely your own. I don't ...

The bus pulled out from behind me and out of the school compound as I stared at the huge building before me that was Everfield Academy This is a little ...

The bus pulled out from behind me and out of the school compound as I stared at the huge building before me that was Everfield Academy This is a little ...

The shade of blue in the sky darkened, as I walked deeper into the forest. You don't need a comma there, it's an unnecessary pause. As usual, I could not ...

If ashley hadn't already pointed everything out, I would have a lot more to say...but she did, so I don't... I really liked this short little section. It was short, ...

Insomnia, you are a freak of nature. and I mean that in the best possible way. Did you start your novel from the very beginning, or add to an old ...

Cheshire, your post made me laugh. I read it twice, and it just got more entertaining. and Always, I loved your section as well. It makes me want to read ...

Ah. 25,500 on the spot and feeling accomplished. Today I found out what it is exactly I'm writing about. :D Good job everybody! Word counts are exciting.

Got to my goal today. I'm as happy as I can be, although I'm not quite as far ahead as I would like to be. I'm really hoping to get ...

Sometimes I could tell on the first night by how loud they were in the bedroom, or what kinds of sounds they made, as sick as it may sound. Men ...

Holy woah. And I was happy with getting to 15,000 this weekend. Here you all are at like...30,000 (of if you're insomnia, pretty much done.) Hmm...