JC

Thank you, and much better :)

Oh hi! I'm Mallory Stillwell! You must be new here because I know most of the kids in 8th grade and I've never seen you before. What did you want ...

So, let me clear this up, does she look human? Or does she look like a fox?

They were tiny mirrors that fell, cracked, and splashed the world that was beneath the clouds. Here you have excess words. That, and was. They don't really add anything to ...

For some reason it makes me think either fantasy, or something Egyptian. Either way, I would pick it up and see what it's about, if it's fantasy, I probably wouldn't ...

Actually, I do need to go back and rework the beginning, because I was writing an entirely different story then. It changed, as most things do, and became what it ...

I am the Creature I am the person staring out the window, hoping, wishing, that some strange force will allow me to live vicariously though it. Through the glass I ...

Very nice, with minimal error. While this is both refreshingly done and origional, something about it rubs me the wrong way. Maybe it's the way that, though it's flash fiction, ...

Hello, my name is Anica, and I'm damn tired of being invisible.

Yeah, I think I hated that Tally gave in so many times. Uglies and Pretties were good, Specials wasn't so much, and I don't think I'm going to read Extra's ...

Hey Pundit! Welcome. Alainna's right, you wont be needing computer talk here, for the most part. Just know things like PM (Private Message), and FAQ (Frequently Asked Questions), and you'll ...

Hey David. There are a lot of fantasy people around here, so I'm sure you'll fit right in ;D Welcome to the family -JC

Hey Dotz, it's great to meet you. I also talk a lot, but as a warning, people here will probably go crazy correcting your grammer. We're writers, it's what we ...

There were quite a few mistakes in this, but I think you should find them on your own. Something that really, really bugged me, was the fact that you seemed ...

Azila seemed to catch the mistakes I found, so I really don't have much to say. I think that the secrecy of it all was done well, and I loved ...