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I was going to buy it once, but the reviews weren't so great. Maybe I should stop relying on other peoples opinions, eh? Anyways, I'll try to check it out, ...

Hey Phoenix! (by the way, awesome name) Welcome to the site, it's pretty nifty, as you can probably tell. I'm JC, and if you ever need anything, don't hesitate to ...

Yay! A fellow writer of novels! I'm also big on writing novels and not publishing them (and nearly loosing all of them). I've written six so far, and am about ...

Hey, welcome back! I'm sure you remember the gist of it, but just in case you need any help figuring things out, feel free to PM me. I too have ...

Hello Cat, If you love debates so much, you should join the debate group. It's pretty awesome. I highly recomend you check it out. If you ever decide to post ...

Chapter One- (I'm a tad short on time, so I'll come back for chapter two) and her mouse Paula Comma before Paula. Caleb licked Carrie’s hand affectionately, and she took ...

Mother told me not to stare, that it was rude. But come on, it was an object. I think this should be one sentence. It was the Gate, the reason ...

Oh. Maybe you should try spelling it phonetically then, because right now it just looks wrong. Or you should try spelling it the more traditional way of 'vampyre'

Okay. Thank you. I was just wondering what the rules were. Personally, I've read a lot of novels with sex in them, and at a point it got to be ...

"Dan Elliot. God! Do you have any fucking manners? You’re literally barking at me; you look like you’re foaming at the mouth. I mean, I know you’re having a rough ...

I've been posting here for a while, but what I have found unclear is the boards tollerance of sex in a story. I mean almost detailed sex, not over the ...

I haven't read this, and I know that that's not much help to you, but here are my suggestions anyways. You don't need so many spaces between whatever that was ...

I hadn't realized that the questions in my head, were actually being asked to me by him. That is quite a weird way to word that...try something a little smoother ...

5/10- I don't like the weird green color. :O

“O, I’m sorry commander this is my son Dallas.” O= Oh “Ah , so this is the young prodigy I’ve been hearing about, very fine boy.” “Do not be alarmed, ...