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Muse: Did you just critique in the form of a poem??? That is so interesting, and cool. I mean, I wasn't sure if it was a critique at first, but ...

Unrealistic??? But Twilight and Eragon are?

sick-making Um...this isn't really a word, and reminds me a lot of Scott Westerfeld in the Uglies series. Not that that's a bad thing, it just stood out and I ...

1/10 because I hate anime, or anything related...sorry. It's nothing against you.

So, the other's have pretty much pointed out everything I already saw, leaving me with nothing but praise, congrats! haha I loved how real this sounded, how true and from ...

like I was talking to a child not a boy that looked like he was at least ten years older than I. Overcluttered. Keep it simple, and try something like ...

This is a story that shall kinda play out with a phantom of the opera-e feel. Well harsh reviews welcome, my grammer and paragraphing skill suck but it is a ...

Hey Dreamer! Welcome!!!!!!!!!!! I'm one of the instructors around here (you'll see us in purple), and I would be more than happy to do what I can to help you ...

There was a lot of repetition in this, and while I like a lot of work I see a lot of the same things going on. A lot of repetition ...

I would give you a 0/10 for saying Shakespeare isn't awesome, but I'm rating quotes so I'll let it slide this one time! 6/10 Because I agree with the cliche ...

10/10 10 for the cause, two because it's orange, and minus two for the font. The dog makes me sad...

4/10 It sounds like a long advertisement.

Wow. That sounded really true and real, which is quite refreshing. You mannaged to point out the things that girls do a lot of because of self-image, or insecruity, and ...

I liked this, although it was too short to really form any true opinion of it. I would like to know a little more, even if it was just the ...

Thank you. I wasn't sure if I needed to say what the character looked like...the story was so short that it didn't really need it, in my opinion. I guess ...