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A few confusions.... His eyes were a green colour, with rich chocolate brown erupting from the pupils. I think you can say color instead of colour...although I never did figure ...

Ello, I shall start by saying that I really liked it. It caught my attention from the start and kept my attention. Which I think is one of the most ...

K, So I read it. And now I'm at a loss for what to do. -Not really looking for grammar/spelling type stuff to be pointed out at this point. I ...

no, she was carrying the Advil around so she could kill herself later. And you seeing as she was going to kill herself she didn't really care if she bled ...

Well...its supposed to be mind boggling...but I didn't know it was to that extent...wow.... and yes Emily/helen/Lily/Dr. Creling/and Derick is actually one person with multiple personality disorder. a

Im in the top five user points, thats so exciting... *smiles*

Okay, maybe you know, maybe you don't, but for the past three months or so...*ponders* yup, three months, me and Windriver Publishing have been working together to get my first ...

hmm, I guess I kind-of meant it to be confusing, because that's how Emily and Helen felt, confused, I wanted to the reader to grasp that. But I suppose there ...

yes...i tend to do that a lot...

Okay, so another short story, I typed this up today in a spur of boredom. I hope you like it. Critiques are encouraged, response's are loved. :D They said I ...

So, is YWS going to actually get a mascot? Or is this just for fun?

I had coils and coils of springy brown curls, that eventually flattened themselves out, and large, wet eyes that gazed at everything they laid upon. My pudgy cheeks and hands ...

hmm...well, its your story, so whatever name you like, I mean, Hayden is a beautiful name, and anyone anywhere could name anyone anything (say that 5 times fast and get ...

Crap...I did not mean to post that twice...oopsie..ignore one then, or read them both if your really really want to...How did I manage that... JCobsesed walks away pondering how she ...

the Yorkshire Manor Why would their be a Yorkshire manor in Venice? Especially seeing as Yorkshire is part of England...I could be wrong because I am in no way an ...