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J.Staniforth

  • Narrative Poetry Re: Pheonix Flame: Human Pain

    I found the repetition in this poem a bit offputting, for example Life emerges, The future promises, The pheonix emerges It takes some thinking about to get your head around ...

    Jan 13, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Dewdrops and a sunrise.

    This is my first post here, so obviously I'm not exactly in tune with the usual forum etiquette that pervades through most of the message boards I've visited before online. ...

    Jan 13, 2008


The adjective should reinvent the noun.
— Leslie Norris