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Is this better, thanks for your thoughts on the first sentence; it was a bit rocky.

This piece was really well-written; at first I was confused as to which one was Katarina and which one was Gabrielle, but it all worked out in the end, Kudos ...

Note-- this is my first try at writing fiction in over 5 years, so please comment! Your comments will determine as to whether or not there will be a part ...

I thought that overall this story is amazing! I love the plot and premise, but there are also certain oddities. Your language in most of the story is fluid and ...

The premise of the story is cute, no doubt about it, but it's a bit cliché. Theres another story on here, i believe called nothing's fair in teen love and ...

I was at a concert and for once remembered my camera! T[quote]ese are my favorite images-- 1) 2) 3) 4) 5) 6) 7) Comments are welcome and appreciated.. I apologize ...

These are my favorite pictures from the past few months, comments would be great! 1) So, first off, my cat.. yeah, i know, lame, etc... but he's winking :wink: 2) ...