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Yeah, I know what you guys mean about it, but still, regardless of age, this was A-Mazinggg!!! Great job, and I, too am addicted to this :D

Hey, I guess that I'll continue where Ghostwriter left off :D Tom looked at his electronic scooter and sighed. At least he can ride this thing again. could still ride ...

AAH! i loved that! :D

I think that this was really cute, and if you develop it more it won't be cute, it will be AWESOME! :D

I agree with strawberrywine there really isn't much for the reader to go on, you seem to be listing what they do, I liked how you did the grades, on-purpose ...

**Since I was amazed at the reaction for my other short piece, here's another. Warning: This piece was written in roughly ten minutes with minimal re-reading. Side effects may include ...

I'm glad that you guys liked it so much :D it was mostly to get past my amazingly resistant writers block :roll: hopefully the end is near :smt026 haha I'm ...

**This is just something that floated to my head and I put it on paper... well, pixels, in about 10 minutes, so lots of C & C would be amazing ...

I have no issues with this piece, which says a lot as I am a "grammar Nazi" However, i thought that this was delightful!If you could PM me when you ...

I love that book! by Stephenie Meyer, there are also sequels: New Moon and Eclipse :D (this is off the top of my head, i think it's right, though...)

** how will ashe and issau get into this bit of the story? could someone accidentally stumble across them somehow? thanks a million! :D **

I think that this story has a lot of potential, continue? :D I liked it a lot, and your grammar was ok, although you could work a bit on punctuation ...

Issau-- She woke up, dazed. Shaking her head, she looked around. Crumbling rubble, smouldering fires and twisted pieces of scrap metal surrounded her as far as the eye can see. ...

Oh, by the way, on the last one, the school one, it's not a sketch on the paper. It's actually my assignment notebook and by pure luck only the words ...

This poem is amazingly beautiful and touching, I love it my only comment is an your spelling of "chaos" as "caos" other than that, great job! I'm sorry for your ...