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Chris "Chris, can you go fetch some water for Max?" yelled Reg from where he was standing behind the parked, and now very mangled, car. It took me a moment ...

Chris I stood frozen in the hallway, completely unsure of what I should do. I could fight, sure, with my hands at least, but I'd never even held a gun, ...

Chris As I watched what seemed like some kind of initiation test, I looked at the girl, Alis carefully. Some people used guns to mask cowardice but I could see ...

Name: Ollie Fisher Age: 16 Profession: (mage, Magekiller, normal citizen) mage Mage type: (only if you're a mage) organic Weapon: (only if you're a Magekiller) Appearance: He is average height, ...

Chris The plane journey had been long and frustrating. The passenger in the seat next to mine had been visibly relieved when we landed, so that he could escape from ...

I don't have any criticisms I thought it was great. I loved the way the whole poem seemed to flow like one continuous line, and the images were great. The ...

Hey, I agree with Cresent in that there could be more detail and depth, but even as a poem on its own it's pretty good. There is one line though, ...

I really like the idea of this poem, I like the images that you used like the "flowers dancing gracefully". My only criticism is that some of the lines don't ...

Sorry I didn't realise I had the same name. I've changed it :) Name: Chris (short for Christine) Age: (17-30) 18 Picture: She's average height, perhaps a bit smaller. She ...

I don't really know how to get rid of the repetition in this one, it's kinda the point =p lol but thanks for the reviews :)

Ape man, you are the past You braved every winter Built only to last. Ape man, you built the earth You saw it from infancy Witnessed its birth. Ape man, ...

Your opinion is more important, because your voice is louder than mine. Yours is the approval that counts. Your ideas are better, because yours are the lips that carried them. ...

There once was a planet called Earth, It twinkled and sparkled with worth, Then in charged our race, And trampled the place, And heated it up like a hearth. There ...

I'm not sure about the title, it seems a bit too plain. Any suggestions for a better one would be great. It seemed like a million years ago the cave ...

Chapter 1 Connor dived behind the barricade just as the bullet exploded over his head. Crouching, he rolled out from behind the wall of sandbags and brought his gun to ...