IzumiRyuichi

In her dream she saw many things. Her mom, dad and her brother. Butterflies flew about her and whispered songs in her ears. Two birds chirped happily. Well, I noticed ...

Hey Protonoob... I mean, ColdZero. I'm not particularly here to review, but I am here to give my opinion on the story. First, this is an amazing story. I read ...

Hey natalie. Sorry, but I decided not to continue this. I'm actually working on a romance being helped by my 17 year old friend RainWanderer. It will definitely be more ...

Hello natalie and welcome to the forums. I am here to review, but not critique. I found this to be very well written. You described suicide in the most of ...

Hey iCarlyFan. My name is Ryuichi and I have a couple of comments I have on these drawings. First, the third drawing had a couple of things that bothered me. ...

I know I shouldn't be spamming this thread, but I have a quick question. Have you watched Chobits? I noticed Chi was your avatar.

Hello Bottomless Eyes and welcome to YWS. I've come here to review, just like every other story. To begin, I liked the grammar. I didn't notice any bad mistakes, but ...

This is amazing. I had no idea this was going to turn into a love story. I'm not good with romance, but this was the best I've seen. When the ...

Well, all I have to say, is that this is outstanding. The detail describing everything was phenomenal and you showed emotions quite well. When Titani's father came home the way ...

Very good. I don't have any big changes, but I do have a couple. If you could, I would suggest continuing the conversation just a little bit. I think it ...

Well, I must say this is a very good poem and I liked how you worded it. I do have a little problem with it also. Closet dwelling octopus Shadow ...

Hello Destiny, I have a quick review for you. First, try to put a little more effort into this. Its very good, but I'm noticing lots of uncapitolized words, nonspacing, ...

Well hello writewannabe. My name is Ryuichi and I just joined YWS. I read this story and found it to be great! I just have a couple of grammar mistakes ...

Wow, this is a very good novel you have begun. I do have a couple of things I think I would have changed. First, try to give more information on ...

Well bravo to this poem. I like the how you made this poem short and easy. Even thought there wasn't much detail added, it made sence. A little more should ...