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Re: Bestia Vis
Kogitsune followed the group worried of what was going to happen. Needles tended to scare him which wasn't going to make it easy. He approached a door which read, "White ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: Bestia Vis
Name:Kogitsune Age: 21 Gender: Male Height: 5'4" Weight: 130 lbs From: SFOU (Stealth Force Operations Unit) I don't think this is real but... Rank: I don't really know this... but ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: An Adventure To Die For {CH1} Adventure?
I will review this later because I can't right now. But I suggest you change those giant paragraphs into more smaller ones.
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Out of Love #1
Hello tmasia and welcome to YWS! My name is IzumiRyuichi and I'm here for a quick review. First off, I liked the story. I didn't have much time to read ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Crossing the Street
Hey, You told me you changed is... so I read it. It's better this time and I enjoyed it even more. Keep up the awesome work! But I have one ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Lonely valentine
Hello Animia and welcome to Young Writers Society! My name is IzumiRyuichi, and I'm here for a quick review. First off, great job on the poem. Your description of the ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Cover Art - O.C.
Its... alright I guess >.>
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: [Short Story] The Wandering Elves (Recently Edited)
I like the edit. Keep up the good work!
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Any anime fans?
I'm a fan of anime! My favorite series is Bleach but I like a lot of others. You can tell by looking at my avatar. (Captain Hitsugaya FTW!)
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Crossing the Street
Hey icanbefixed... (weird name), my name is Ryuichi and I love your poem. I like how you describe what I think is choices in life, but with hands. Crossing the ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: what if?
This is pretty good. I like the description (whoever wrote this) of the feelings of the people. When (Insert name here) said "tummy", it killed the mood a little ._. ...
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: Sky of Love-Prologue[WIP]
That is true. But for now, I need your help in what happens next. (I'll talk to you on xfire)
Feb 15, 2010 -
Re: The Tavern
Izumi randomly walks into the tavern and sits down at the counter. He asks for some ale to sooth him from his last mission in the land of Kuklic. He ...
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: Tomb Raider
Nice job on the drawings, I like them a lot! Keep up the good work!
Feb 14, 2010 -
Re: Greed
Good Job on this poem. I like how you described power and how one wants it so much. This doesn't quite have to do with your style, but if you ...
Feb 14, 2010
