IzumiRyuichi

Awesome story! I liked the pressure you put on the reader to read on and find out who this "being" was! Overall I found a few rushed parts and some ...

I really can't anything about this. I am amazed at what I just read. I gained a smile as I read and then was struck down at the end. It ...

Here's A quick review. First, it definitely was rushed. You used little detail which didn't keep me interested. If this was longer, I would have stopped. Besides that, I think ...

I would also delete some of the rules. There are to many to handle. At least simplify them.

I think this is a little to hard for some people...try to make it easier.

Hey rain, great job on the story. It was a short, but amazing story. You described the thoughts of the boy so well along with his actions. You portrayed almost ...

Well, first off, great job on the story. I liked the detail you put into the story. Even though I wish what happened in this story doesn't happen in real ...

Hey Awesome, I read both parts of your story, and they both were awesome (Corny joke...)! I liked how you described everything that was going on around you and how ...

Izumi put down his pencil tired of all the writing he had done. He picked up his paper and read over his writing. As his eyes scanned the letters, he ...

Title of story: don't have one Genre: Violence, Action, war Writer’s name: Izumi Ryuichi The setting of story: War. The planet of Rofgan is at a total world war. The ...

Great job loveless! I read the first part of this story and loved it. I now have read the second part, and its great! I really didn't find any mistakes ...

Hello FictionWriter, Izumi here for a review. It was a good story, but It needs some work... Red is what I think should be changed Blue is my Suggestion As ...

Hey Cold, I'm here for a quick review. The first thing I have to say, is try to make it slightly more in detail. I loved the story overall, but ...

Here's the next chapter in Sky of Love. RainWanderer and I worked on this together to get the best results, and we both think it turned out well. But, for ...

Well hello Forestqueen, Izumi here for a quick review. First off, it was very good. I liked how you put what could be a long story into a few paragraphs. ...