Ismeme

Very well written. The tone and voice is wonderful, like I can hear the characters speaking. The descriptions are very well detailed, though you use a lot of filler words. ...

I loved this story. Telling this from a Grimm's point of view is very interesting, comparing they're pretty much in the background of every story. Anyways, great job, and you ...

I love it. I look forward to reading the second chapter. You're a great writer, and do a wonderful job at making your words flow, something a lot of people ...