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Ok, this is my first ever novel, and I would love some feedback on it. I know it's not the greatest, but I am full of ideas and I need ...

Wow, I really loved this. You kept me wanting more enough though nothing extremely exciting was happening. It was a nice read, though sad because I feel sorry for Eleanor. ...

Yeah, I couldn't really see them either :( It was too big and I could only see a portion of it. But from what I saw it looks good :)

I'm not sure about others, but I would classify this under Science Fiction (based on all that I've read). Ok, first off, I'm wondering where these two characters are! You ...

Good start! Just a couple of things though... -Try to make it longer next time. This was really short. It's okay though, sometimes short can be good, its just that ...

This reminds me of a topic we were discussing in school the other day, how the world has a misconception on the word "beautiful". How you have to be skinny, ...

Truly Adorable but bittersweet at the same time.

Great little story! You were good with the descriptions, I could picture it well in my head :] I have agree with Burma, however. A bit of a back story ...

Haha, I just noticed that I did that XP Thanks for pointing it out, because reading it through again, I realized it just doesn't work. I'll edit the names straight ...

Obliviate Chapter One As the elderly man took a small sip from his recently made tea, Healer Baggins fussed over the flowers left on his bedside table. “Honestly, Maggie, I ...

It really depends on the type of book you are writing. If you have already written most of it in 1st person, then you should just stick with it. Just ...