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Ooohhh, I think I'll do Challenge One. Sounds fun, since I love making up characters. Might try drawing some of them too. ~Island

My friends must think I'm weird.

Oooooh! I love it! Good thing blue is my favourite colour! :)

This was a great read! Every time he felt the atmosphere in his small bedroom, he remembered the memories with Tom, even after a month had passed. Only thing (grammar ...

I think I'm going to attempt this for the first time this year :) I have no idea what I'm going to do yet...

Awesome second chapter! I love Ela's determination, even though its hard. I can't really see anything wrong with this one that I didn't point out before. Great job! :]

Hi! Great first chapter! I really liked reading all the action. Something I think you need to improve on is emotions. I want to get to know your characters more. ...

Thank you! And yeah, the journal is my least favourite thing I've written (for this novel) so far. There is just some information in there that is quite important, but ...

Thank you both for reviewing! It really helped :) As for the first sentence, yeah, I know its terrible. Nothing seemed to fit so I just stuck that there. It'll ...

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Thanks for reviewing you three :) @Deathcurrent, being the author, everything makes sense to me. What exactly confused you? That way I can fix it. I've been working on Part ...

The middle...And end. I'm usually good at the beginning, because that's the only part I write before quitting :)

Wow, that's a really short prologue! Honestly, you might as well just make it a part of the first chapter since it's so short. It was interesting though. Makes me ...

Accidently posted Chapter One twice, so I'll make this Chapter Two! It’s been ten horrifying years since her mysterious death, and the once small and helpless Evelyn had flourished into ...