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Re: Gale-A hunger Games fanfic
Wow...there are so many reviews I doubt this will ever get read...but I thought it was good. No, excellent. I thought characters were well maintained, I liked the way you ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Short Action Scene
Good, very good. I liked the length. The action is interesting, cool, but not overly descriptive. It's very fast paced, which I like, and is specific enough for you to ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Short Action Scene
Good, very good. I liked the length. The action is interesting, cool, but not overly descriptive. It's very fast paced, which I like, and is specific enough for you to ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Lust
THis can be described with the word; POWERFUL. Very powerful. Obviously feuled by a personal experience, these are emotions that lay in the mind of every mortal being, and it ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: The Road Taken
This was a good story, well thought out and planned, not improvised. Descriptions and figurative language seemed to flow on their own power. The only problem I had was that ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: The Escape of Adam Seth
"Get him! Get him!" Commanded Carlisle. The young man fled with agility, turning corners faster than the soldiers could hope. He was a fast runner, but there was no possible ...
Nov 1, 2011
