Isaac

So, first of all, good way to get your feelings across. Interesting topic. But I think your piece is a bit melodramatic. The earth will survive, we are just killing ...

I like it. You pick a good topic, the difficulty and pain of giving up a dream. The lyrics are good, although I probably wouldn't be the best person to ...

I really like this poem, its not overly complicated. But it gets the meaning across. "ran down its face. " In this line I might suggest changing "its" to "our". ...

Its definitely a good start. The meaning could be a little clearer. I think you are saying that this person is chasing unreachable dreams. I like how you are taking ...

I wrote this for English a while back. Its kinda strange, well, its really strange, but those were part of the yeah. It was supposed to be about a good ...

I thought it was good, its a tough topic to work with. It does lack some of the emotions that I might expect in it, but I think its an ...

This is really good! Its very original. As many people have said, its not a way of looking at the stars that you see very often. The fourth stanza is ...