Isaac

Hey, so I'm Isaac! I'm actually only kinda new. I've been on here for about a week now. I like doing a lot of stuff so I can't really classify ...

Hey Vei! Sorry if I get nit pick sometimes by the way. The wolf from behind takes advantage and attacks first, spinning around his body and staff, striking the wolf ...

Its good, I don't have much time, so I'll say this quickly. I did have one issue, when she is done talking with John there doesn't seem to be any ...

Thank you for your help! I think I changed it to make the emotion change less weird. The change of room was supposed to be weird though. I also added ...

Thanks for the help everyone! If you want me to review anything just PM me!

Oh my gosh, I don't know what to say. This is amazingly well written. The other people who got to it before me have really covered all the minor issues. ...

Hey! I'll give you a review :P And while I know that you can stand a day without doing anything I just can't stat still!” I think you mean "stand". ...

Well, I think I've done like 4 so far, I'll go for at least 6 more.

I think I get what the poem is about. Least it appeals to feelings I've had before. So I really like it. Now, lets see if I can actually critique ...

This is really really good, I just went through everything you have written for your novel so far. I hope you keep going with it! I don't actually have anything ...

Okay, so firstly. It isn't quite clear how the organization of this is set up. The writing is really good, I love the description. But it isn't quite clear what ...

Hey, so firstly. This is really good! When I was reading it I didn't feel the need for there to be more description, although you don't really give a lot ...

Hey, looks like I get the honors of first review. So I would definitely say that I like it. It flows nicely in most places, and the meaning was at ...

Thanks for the comment! Yeah, I think I know what you mean, I guess I was trying to make it seem very surreal. I think I'll make some of the ...

This is the second part of my short story for English, if you missed the first part. Here is the link. Outside the hospital the city was in different states ...