Isaac

Hey its Isaac. I'll try and help you out here. I saw that you had a question about the info dump sorta thing. Welcome to YWS by the way!!!! Anyways...now ...

HAHA! This is amazing! One of the best things I have seen on YWS. Its different, but I absolutely love your style. Someone once said to me that nothing can ...

I like this, you get a really good feel for who this person was, and what their life was like. You manage to get across a story for this person. ...

Interesting, I like the symbolism that you used. I also like how you didn't make the person seem like they were just ranting about how their life sucked. A major ...

So, I'm not yet sure what I think. It'll probably become clear as I write this review ;) Firstly, I can't quite tell if you want to make it creepy, ...

Hey, so I really like this poem. It has a very nice, mysterious flow. The rhyming is subtle, the whole poem is very...sensual. I like how you used purled by ...

Hey, so I'll make this fast. No nit picks, I'll leave that to someone else. One thing I noticed was that although you had really good rhyming going on for ...

Hey Pink! So I don't really like being too nit picky. So I'll stick to the general stuff. Pretty good description. If you could mix in Lucas' general description with ...

Oh my gosh! You do free running!!! No one got it when I said that I did parkour! lol I can explain what free running is, its kinda like parkour ...

Hey Ashley! FireFly got to everything that would be helpful at the moment. So welcome to YWS and I hope you enjoy, well, everything.

Haha, thanks everyone! Thats odd though, two people here are going to be biochemical engineers, and I mean... who would want to do that? ;) Princess: Then have a hearty ...

Hey, so overall I like it. Just one quick thing to point out. I would help with grammar, but that's not really my forte. So, the one thing. I noticed ...

Heyo, I'll be your reviewer today, tonight, whatever :P So, I like it, its different. Its an idea that I haven't seen before in a poem. So, I give thumbs ...

Haha, jeeze Tala. Way to be positive with the new person! Hey, I'm sure Tala has a point, haven't been here long enough myself. But welcome and enjoy YWS!!!

Snoink: What kind of engineering do you like more? Ah, I write short stories for the most part, I'm working on a novel, and I've written a couple poems. But ...