Isaac

Yeah, this piece was actually one that I used for a 500 words or less competition. So basically this is just a teaser. I'm going to expand it when I ...

He took the first step up the stairs, revolver in hand. His foot took it with a heavy thump, leg numb from cold and pain. Head spinning he swayed lightly ...

Thanks Lava and Esme! Those reviews helped a lot. The problem with the italics was more that although I knew how to do the italics, I didn't catch all the ...

Thank you everyone! This was pretty harsh, but I know I have a lot to work on, so its better to know exactly what it is than be ignorant... I'll ...

Wow, that was a great review. Thank you so much! I'm sorry about the grammar though...I'm terribly embarrassed actually. I'm terrible with grammar, and I use OpenOffice, so it doesn't ...

Heyo. So I really liked this, I liked the meaning behind it, and I liked the inspiration for it. I'm not terribly good at reviewing poetry, and this is different ...

I love it! Best of all three I've looked at! I bet a lot of people can identify with this. Now, for the actual review. Nothing actually caught my eye ...

I like the first more, personally. It seems more alive. The way the colors blend is also nice, like the gold-green-blue near the bottom. Like the brown color almost makes ...

Hello, its me again. So, I liked this one. There was just one thing that I noticed interrupted the flow a bit. I’m no longer a pure person, I'm not ...

Heyo, its Isaac. So, I liked the basic idea of this piece. But I don't think it was long enough. There was also a sort of issue logic wise. I ...

Hey, its Isaac. I'm not too proficient with poetry myself, but I'll give it a shot. I really liked the idea behind this, or, lack thereof, since it was just ...

Hey Skins! So, I think you are really good at reviewing. So I was curious if you could review this, There are more parts to it if you like it, ...

This is the final piece! Yay! Apologies again for it being so long... Anywho, thanks for taking a look at it. Here are the first, and second parts, Sandar and ...

Here is the first part, They reconviened and figured out a safe route to the secret passage, no one wanted to risk the as of yet untested device just yet. ...

Hey, I seem to have run out of friends and family who are willing to review this behemoth. Thanks for the reviews if you are willing to, but I realize ...