IsItLove

Sorry if this is completely wrong but...was it to with an arranged Muslim marriage? I thought that where "Father" came in, because anywhere else it may have been a little ...

Thank-you for your help.

“Maria!” I heard my Grandmother call, I trawled down the stairs. “Wash the dishes and then take the bins out.” I was beginning to know how Cinderella felt. Honestly, sometimes ...

Wow. I really liked the variation on the length of the lines. It was was beautiful to read and it had a great feel to it. It gave me warmth ...

I really enjoyed this. It was terribly true. Times when I want to relive that moment forever and now, I can't remember the simplest of details. Your writing is fantastic, ...

I like your writing it is extremely complex and your vocabulary is to die for. Although I found the wrting very confusing and that made it hard to follow and ...

As I breathed tightly in, I reopened my eyes, bracing myself for the day I was about to experience. I picked up my school bag and walked out the door; ...

That was beautiful. Parts of it reminded me of Titanic: the romantic part, not the ship sinking, everyone dying part! I really enjoyed it, you could tell it came from ...

I really enjoyed it so far and can't wait to see where it leads, there was only a few mistakes I spotted! most people in town we’re making the most ...

As I stared out of the window, gazing at my future, my eyes came across my new residence. A pale grey detached house, blinds turned carefully to look welcoming but ...

I made some changges and hope it's better. :)

Thank-you both. I tried to make her ease into to it a little more but I couldn't really think how to, so I made it so that the police officer ...

It must have been a bad dream. I cautiously opened my eyes. Reality struck with a lightning force. I took a deep breath, and absorbed the surroundings. I heard a ...

I loved the story, it was heart-warming. It was beautiful the way you portrayed it from Chloe's point of view. The writing was amazing, I was engrossed. Xxx

I loved the story ! There isn't really any editing to be said that hasn't been already! So i'll skip that part. I really enjoyed it, but I agree with ...