IsItLove

I thought that was written amazingly. You didn't give too much away to the reader. However, you kept the reader drawn in with you beautiful description. I gazed at the ...

I walked slowly to school, headphones in full volume I was lost in a distant world, carried away by the beat of each track. Once I had arrived I meet ...

As I awoke I felt the bright Saturday sunlight filter into my eyes. I slowly got out of bed and headed for the bathroom. I showered myself, as I thought ...

WOW! I really enjoyed that, although at parts I found it hard to work out which person you were talking about so it might be an idea to put more ...

I really enjoyed this. I likeed the begining and how it progressed. Here are some nitpicks: quick and a police car to You need to add and extra 'o' to ...

Hi I think you need to add a little more than just a blurb to get people interested. You need to remove the second capital here: KIsha There shouldn't be ...

I really enjoyed that it gave a beautiful insight into your life and it also gave me an understanding. It is such a shame that you forgot your routine but ...

Don’t get me started on role models. These days I am left questioning myself about what a role model actually is; a good example? Because that’s not what I see ...

I think you are a brilliant writer; what you had was really interesting but, there was no story. I think you need to add a lot more detail and a ...

Thank-you so much I really appreciate it. I found all your comments really helpful. :D

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I really enjoyed the story; I thought it was very interesting and a great concept. I thought you decription was really good and I really liked when you decribed how ...

“Mama, Mama, Mama. Don’t go Mama, please. I need you. Don’t leave me here Mama. Mama.” I woke up, sweating and crying. The reoccurring nightmare haunted me not only in ...

I liked your idea, although I think you need to have a bit more action to your story because not much really happened in your first chapter. :) We are ...

I really enjoyed the song; it's really beautiful. I love the single lines dotted about it really mixes it up. You need to move the exclamation mark onto the same ...