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Re: Traveling Sailor
Hello there :) This is really cool!!! It's quite haunting and even thought I don't know the tune of the song, I found myself making one up and humming as ...
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Re: Life after him ~ Chapter 1 ~
Hi there :) I love your setting XD Ireland is a great place! I think your characterization is really good so far. You can sorta sense the chemistry between the ...
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Re: Heavenly Heart~Chapter One
......this is really good. Like really, really good. I really like Dane's characterization. You can practically feel his helplessness at his situation. His inner and outer agony is palpable. The ...
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Re: Novel Opening Page
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Jun 10, 2014
(This was meant to be a review XD) Hi there! I really liked your beginning so far. Your description of the setting is very vivid, and I could picture it ... -
Re: Novel Opening Page
Hi there! I really liked your beginning so far. Your description of the setting is very vivid, and I could picture it clearly in my head. I also really like ...
Jun 10, 2014
