InvisibleInkx

The Dentist I stared around in panic as the car rounded the corner. Oh no… it was getting closer and closer with every passing second. Quickly, I racked my brain, ...

Wow! This is such a cool idea! Just one question, though. Were you describing a character or a story? Either way, this was incredibly interesting to read. -Nitpicks- (take/leave what ...

Thank you very much for your review! Yeah, I know the plot was unoriginal... but the prompt our teacher gave us was, "You got lost." So I kind of took ...

Oops... I didn't know about the 2 reviews thing... D: But thank you so much for reviewing! I really appreciate it. :D --Anjali

This was a story I wrote for my Creative Writing Class. I had a lot of fun with it :) Any comments are much appreciated! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Disneyland: the happiest, and ...

I like it a lot! The wording and rhythm was a bit awkward in some places, but otherwise it's very nice. I especially love the ending. Great job! :D

I thought that this was excellent! Great plot and characters, and I love your description. Good job :) Now for the nitpicky stuff... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ She was certain she’d seen something ...