Insomnia

Okay, I've edited a lot of the grammar and spelling related stuff, but my tutor wants me to do a heap of stuff about the story, and extension, so I ...

For sure Sword (Don't blame me, I don't know what else to call you lol). I think we all know that this story needs a bit of work! I could ...

Okay, you know how this is from my correspondance? Well, my tutor wants me to go through and maul it because he wants it published. So, I need help with ...

Yes, I did. But I'd just been talking to someone named Christie. I'm easily confused lol.

Thanks JC and Ahsh. I'll try to work on the stuff with the names. Turns out I had a version that had them in it, but I put this one ...

Thanks for the crit- and sorry for giving you so many mistakes! ;) Sorry about the pigeon thing. I've always spelt it like here. No idea why. Anyway, I fixed ...

I was just thinking about that last night, Luna. Just got back from hokliday so I had a bit of tiem to think on it. I think the second part ...

I'll just have to hope that original comment is a compliment coming from you lol. ;) But thanks. :)

I'll take that nomination back then lol. Thanks for clearing that up Kaz. :)

I'd have to nominate the Narnia series as a whole, unless it's too old. :o And I'll second The BFG

Thanks all you guys for your crits. I tried to fix most of the stuff they were talking about, but I'm not quite clear on which words you were commenting ...

Oh, and by the way lol, Zeus is supposed to look weak. I was trying to show that he's human too, and so I had to make him be more ...

Hey again. I don't think there's anything for me to critique here. This chapter was amazing. Hopefully the next one'll be out in the next day. I'll be waiting. ;)

Oh, sorry if I didn't make that clearer lol. I just meant the part after the speech in that sentance. I had to read it through a few times. My ...

Thanks to both of you for the crit. I've tried to fix up most of the stuff you asked me to, Jig. I'll just have to look up a couple ...