Insomnia

I'm done with the first three. I'll get onto your critique tomorrow, Tiff, as it's 2 in the morning and it looks like yours is a pretty long piece. Don't ...

Hey. We haven't met before, I don't think. :) This was an interesting piece. It was a bit short for me to get any impressions. It could use a lot ...

Hey, pop. :D You posted on my thread, so I'm here. I liked this piece a lot. It was entertaining, and your characters seemed realistic with the occasional exception. I ...

Hey, Kitty. :) Thanks for posting in my thread. Here's your critique. I could say it was the phone call that sweltering summer day when the clothes were drying on ...

Hey, Pengy. ^_^ You're the first commenter, so thank you. :P I'll get into this now. Excuse me if I seem a bit harsh. I blame sleep deprivation. You already ...

Hey. Moving onto the first chapter now, like I said. :P This was good. It added more depth to the characters and improved on the prologue a lot. I haven't ...

Hey. :) I was looking for something to review, and this caught my attention. It's quite a nice piece of work. I enjoyed reading it, and I'll be going on ...

I've been procrastinating for ages, but it's December and school's out until February, so I have no excuse not to critique. Give me your stories and I'll do my best ...

Congratulations, Andy. You deserve it. :D

Hey. :) I don't think I've read anything of yours before. That's the problem with disappearing for months. You don't know anybody anymore. XD On with the critique. This was ...

Hey. You're a new member, I see? Welcome to YWS. Hope you have a good time here. :) We have a rule here about posting your work. You have to ...

:lol: You just have to love people. Well, either that or get rid of them, but then they can't give any more entertainment. The best part is "Free dog souls ...

Rawr. So, I'm here for the third critique. I'm expecting that this one won't be as long. I'm going to write it as I go so I don't miss anything ...

Okay, the three of us obviously posted at around the same time, so the plotline's been muddied a bit. Um, a lot, then. Anzius, this is what was supposed to ...

Kester Kester saw the ball of flames swirling towards the three of them and froze. It seemed to be comprised of an infinite amount of words. They were incomprehensible to ...