Insomnia

That's amazing. :o Congratulations!

Hey, guys. Back from a quick holiday and all up to date. Anyone else need a review? :)

Hey. :) I'm here to do your review. I'm not reading over the other recent ones, in case they bias me, so please excuse me if I repeat things. The ...

Hey, pop. :) I thought I'd come and give this a critique, because no one's found it yet. They'll be here soon, I expect. For now, I'll have a look ...

xD Kitty and I are working on a post together at the moment. She had to go, so I've posted what we have so far. Lucky it ends on a ...

Kester Kester looked around the mess hall. The others were still eating, but a small meal had satisfied his cravings. Strange , he thought. I was locked up for so ...

Hey, Heather. :) I thought I'd get your crit done tonight. I'll get straight into it, and give my general impressions later. Chocolate used to seem much too expensive and ...

There you go, Jamie. Your review's done. Length is no problem. Oddly enough, I had less to comment on for you than most, so nice job. ;) I'll get onto ...

Hey, Jamie. This is one of the most enoyable things I've read on here in a while. You had good dialogue, some interesting characters with complex relationships, and the beginnings ...

Hey, Brad. This was pretty perfect in terms of the story. I struggled to find anything negative to comment on. I do have a nit-pick or two, though. it would ...

The colours of the trees were vivid in contrast to the greys of the camp. Inside, the people seemed to take on the same colour. They walked with slumped shoulders, ...

xD Well, I've just gotten on and seen your piece on the front page. I was going to PM you and comment, but I guess I'll look through it here ...

Hey, Tiff. I'm back with the second half of the critique, if you're ready for it. ;) This part is a lot better than the one before it. I enjoyed ...

Hey. I'm going out. Won't be back on until tomorrow evening, after I sleep. xD I just thought I'd post and say that if Kester is in any of the ...

Hey. Thanks for posting in my thread. :) Here's your critique. I may have to post a little of it and come back to finish it tomorrow, as I don't ...