Insomnia

My mind seems to think too far ahead lol. I read the first line or two and thought: Yep, they're studying humans down there. You did at least make it ...

Just read the edited version. Seems a lot better now. Just a couple of things I can see to do now. Red lips glistened as she smiled, pulled taut against ...

I don't really have much to crit here. I remember reading something like it in a school play, but this actually had some pretty good dialogue. The real aliens actually ...

This was really good, just got a bit confusing. But I loved your use of language. It was perfect for that style of narration, because it helped it seem more ...

Hey! Just read this with all the other parts. I'd been looking forward to it but I didn't realise it was even out lol. Worth the wait. ;) Everything Tamia ...

I actually did kind of like the books. Okay, they were majorly cliched, but at least they knew it. Althoguh I do admit the end of Eldest did put me ...

This made me laugh. First time in a while from reading, I'd say. Seems rare to find something that can do that these days. So thanks for that. I loved ...

I don't really use plot to progress my stories, as such. I just put my character in a situation with a firm knowledge of who the character is and how ...

I thought it was a pretty amazing series. As far as I can remember, I read it a few years back and decided I wanted to be a writer! I ...

I just had to comment on this. It's really good, even alongside the other stories up for offer on here. It seems to flow easily, which is good. I know ...

I just had to comment on this. It's really good, even alongside the other stories up for offer on here. It seems to flow easily, which is good. I know ...