Insomnia

I'm not a poet Jenna, so I can't really crit this, but I have to say that I really enjoyed it. :) So good work. Hopefully you keep going with ...

Thanks all you guys for your crits. I tried to fix most of the stuff they were talking about, but I'm not quite clear on which words you were commenting ...

This was great. Sorry, there's not much else I can say. I can see the woman writing this. Just a couple of typos that I saw: No, not know my ...

I hated it when lee Scoresby died and wouldn't read the book. I didn't go back to it until I thought about it and realsied Serafina would have died if ...

I liked it Lucy. :o And that's not meant to look shocked, it's just showing that it had an impact. You actually caught the dream in the sort of way ...

The women stood in a circle, their black hoods flung back from their heads. They were encircling one of their own. They were woman of all heights, weights and races, ...

I'm just putting some stuff as I find it, so it might be a bit off lol. So... The fire had long gone out, plunging the cosy campsite into gloom. ...

Oh, and by the way lol, Zeus is supposed to look weak. I was trying to show that he's human too, and so I had to make him be more ...

xD Sorry, I didn't see that you'd posted the next part. :o Not that I'm bubbles, but still, I'm here. The funny factor was still pretty high. Althoguh maybe that's ...

Hey Elein! This was great, and now you've got me intrigued. I like your writing style, because it really seems to flow well to me. Some stories on here take ...

I don't know if it's true, but when I was in there not long ago with some other people he was alright, but when we all posted at once he ...

Thanks for that. I was panicking a bit lol. Do you know if I could get writing magazines and things like that from New Zealand? Edit: Sorry, I have no ...

I wouldn't say I partially disagree with number five. I just disagree in general. Everyone's different, but I'm the type of person that finds that when you leave a story ...

Grats on getting those published Sureal! :o That's pretty cool. I had one story published last year in this book, so I know how good it feels. ;) Umm, just ...

Hey again. I don't think there's anything for me to critique here. This chapter was amazing. Hopefully the next one'll be out in the next day. I'll be waiting. ;)