Insomnia

Muahahaha. I didn't see this post for ages, but I murdered those pidgeons... joke intended, by the way. I really should put the next part of this up. Oh well. ...

My inner snoink can be male. ;)

Go Garth Nix! :D Have you read the Keys to The Kingdom books? Well, the ones that are out, anyway. And I can second Robin Hobb. :o And sworddance doesn't ...

Silly Clau. The world has always tasted like strawberries. Always will, until the great acid rain floods. :o Snoink told me they were coming. Or not. Maybe everyone has an ...

Hey, Fluffy. :) As prologues go, this was really good. It isn't about the length, it's about trying to intrigue your writer from the very beginning. Which you've done here. ...

Welcome, Jessica. I think most writers have self esteem issues of some kind lol. My story got published in a book and I wouldn't let most of my friends read ...

I get the same thing when I look up My Portfolio (if that's what it's called). The title seems to be biger than the rest. Probably meantto be like that ...

Thanks for finding that Nate. It was starting to get really annoying. By the way, does that have anytihng to do with the lag we get on the actual site ...

He didn't set a word limit, but he thinks I'm a bit long winded lol! It's a correspondance thing, so he's just tryign to help. xD And I cannot stand ...

Welcome to YWS Imelda. :) And I think it'd be hard to find a writer that isn't addicted to some chocolate. Or somethign sweet anyways lol. Hope you have a ...

Wow! o.o Thanks for the crit sword. :D I really appreciate it. And thanks for the compliments too. I was wondering if the humour was too subtle. I agree with ...

Ack! I'm still working on the first one! Should I be worried lol? But I asked for it... literally. ;) But seriously, I am grateful for the help. I want ...

I don't know if I can comment fairly because I can't write second person (Only ever tried third once or twice!). But personally, I liked it. I actually enjoyed it. ...

I think you have a nicely developed set of characters that you should expand upon. ;) It was entertaining. I'll admit, I didn't actually laugh properly, but it is a ...

Look out. Nate's turning into a demon or something! :o