Insomnia

Hey again. I think I'm going to limit myself to only critting two of these in a day. Otherwise I'll race through and have nothing to read. xD Anyway, just ...

Hey Meevs. :D I always did say that I'd get around to reading Ice Cubes one day. It was just a bit later than I thought it would be lol. ...

Dan waited anxiously for the drow, frequently looking around. He couldn't see any drows that looked menacing, but he knew nothing of their race. What looked friendly to him could ...

Dan raised an eyebrow at Lye. "You know, before we go in, it might be helpful to light this." Lye's expression almost resembled a grin. She took the torch from ...

I noticed the names, but not the map. Honestly, I can't remember reading the sentance about the map. My memory seems to be dropping away lol!

Hey Jig! Just read this, and even though I've read the first part before, it still held my attention. A few problems in here, I think. His breaths were rapid ...

Jamie watched Mev and Kevin leave, and sighed. They walked out of sight, and he turned back towards Alain. The man looked excited about whatever he was talking about, and ...

Okay, I'm pretty sure the order of posting got screwed up. And I just got ditched listening to the professor lol. I'll just post something now and I'll work it ...

Dan walked away from the avian, muttering under his breath. Lye watched him carefully. "What's wrong?" "Celka told me to watch over the avian, but he obviously wants nothing to ...

Grrr. :( You're like, the master of cliffhangers. Even if it turns out it might not even be all that important, you build up the suspense. So, that's really cool. ...

I've never seen the movie, but I still thoguht it was funny lol. I felt sorry for that egg; his parents must have hated him to give him that name. ...

Hey Jessica. :) I liked this, it was really well done. And I am interested to see what sort of person she would become. But you actually made that really ...

Dan glanced at the others on the roof. She'ana didn't seem to be paying attention, rubbing a cream on her arm. But Celka was standing nearby, watching him with an ...

Wow. That was just a bit of an about face! ;) I almost got left behind, but that was really good. You just can imagine something like that happening, can't ...

... yeah. I think you stepped away from cliche there. Or sprinted, rather. ;) I didn't find anything here. So now I'm on to part 4 lol.