Insomnia

Leah sat on the dock, stomach protruding in front of her, feet dangling over the edge. She watched them skim the water and she caught her breath at the icy ...

Kristie rushed about the house, grabbing anything that looked remotely important. Ray followed after like a lost sheep, while she threw questions about what he needed at him. He answered ...

This was pretty good in spite of its length 9and probably because of it). A story like this may get a bit tired if you add in pages and pages ...

Actually, I'm a bit happy that there isn't a cliffhanger. My heart might have given out or something. ;) I'd have to agree with Ada, : the dialogue exchange got ...

I didn't find anything wrong in this one. :) You could re-do your paragraphs to make it easier to read, but that's all up to you. I want to get ...

Finally! xD I haven't seen POD around for like, two weeks. xD I think I read all of Ice Cubes since you last posted it. -_- I just got a ...

That's not very nice. Not only did Chris not come in for the whole Chapter, Becca did instead lol! That's just horrible. xD I had just be thrown hastily be ...

Hey Meevs. I think I'll push on to the end of what you have on here now. :D This Chapter seemed familiar to my, and then I remembered that this ...

Hey. And maybe once again I spoke too soon. You get disappointment and a good surprise in the space of one Chapter! =O I only found one thing this time, ...

Okay, maybe Jamiy isn't going to get hurt... yet lol. This chapter was good, first time in a while that he actually looked like he could be happy. “You actually ...

Hey Meevs. It's not just past midnight no, so what I say might be a bit more coherent. ;) but one day when she had a ridiculous craving for mars ...

Yeah. I had to sleep in the computer room, so I thought I'd at least do something fun. And now, I feel like reading more. Getting closer to caught up ...

“I liked you’re other room better *your I wont ever go in its room anyway.” *won't “No. No its not. After that first nio could just be a comma, but ...

Wow, seriously? I thought that was just me. Well, it's actually Social Studies, but that's close enough, isn't it? Now I'm going to stop before I go into a rant ...

This was a really short Chapter, and I didn't find anything wrong. But I just have to say: Not every day freezing cold blue liquid pours out of your seat. ...