Insomnia

Yay! Thanks for that, Bubbles. I think I just done most of the things you suggested. And you'd better not be teasing that name. You did come up with it, ...

Hey! :D I've been waiting for this chapter for... I don't know how long. Seriously. Memory issues, but it was worth the wait. i enjoyed it, like the last one. ...

Thanks, to both of you. :) Sorry about the info dumping. it seems to be a thing of mine when I'm writing in first person. In third, I tend to ...

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Hey, I'm on one! =O I'm amazed lol. Let me try... 1. Mattster 2. Squallz 3. Skell 4. Siegfried 5. Snoink 6. staring_at_ceiling 7. Riedawriter 8. Claudette 9. Adam_Atlantian 10. ...

Hey. :D You asked me for a read over, so... here I am! I'm just reading over this now, and I'm impressed. It's really riveting, keeps me reading. I've only ...

hey Ginger. How are you? :) This was good. It had detailed desciption, which always helps a reader into a scene. I think it's too short, though. I wanted more. ...

Thanks. :D I fixed the grammatical stuff you showed me. I'm not so sure about the rest of it though. For me, it's not really like george's story. He's writing ...

I know nothing about scripts, so I can't help much, but isn't it supposed to be guilty by reason of insanity? Means they done it, but it's not their fault, ...

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Hey, Lucy. I like this. :) There's just a couple of random complaints. Not mistakes, just pet peeves of mine lol. the kid from down the road No idea why, ...

Haha. I have an idea now. I've been reading those paranoid conspiracy books. 9/11 and stuff like that. Most people have probably read one, right? xD But I did find ...

Hey, Andy. First off, I have have to say that this is awesome without any editing. Your descriptions are amazing. I've just been trying to focus on dialogue, lately. xD ...

Meh. I call it aluminum foil, but in science I call it aluminium because it goes with the rhyme. =O

Um... I will be posting more of this soon! Then I'll look forward to it even more. ;) I was afraid you might not even put any more on. Then ...