Inksplatter

Hello everyone. I am willing to review every piece you throw at me, but keep in mind that if you write a long piece and want me to review it, ...

Squall and Jiggity for posting a mass review on my work 'Silvery Whispers' Thanks guys :) Xx

Thanks for your reviews everyone! :) I really apreciate it

When you smile, you remind me of a cliche of you and I of happier days. It doesn't fit together well, try to add some description of the cliche time ...

I have read it, awhile ago to be exact. The descriptions of the whispering rain have been over used, and it can get quote boring half way through. Don't get ...

I'm definate you'll fit in nicely, all the good members use smileys! :)

Welcome Ducati! I shall not write a bigraphy on the rules as I am not a Greeter, but I shall announce the 2:1 ratio. Before posting a piece of your ...

Welcome to YoungWritersSociety (YWS) I'm fairly fresh off the shelf and so I am still navigaitng my way around the forum. The people here are so welcoming and I believe ...

No matter how hard I try I eventually slip up. This just doesn't match with what you're trying to say, maybe something with emotion and description should be placed here ...

Chocolate

I was awaken this morning, by the sound of blue jays chirping and squirrels dancing in the trees. This first paragraph sounds forced. The first section is the most crucial ...

Banned for having a Tiara

Thanks guys :)

Hey! Welcome to YWS, you're sure to fit in! Those colours are the same as my walls in my room, it actually looks decent, but half looks like an aquariam! ...

'Ello :) Heehee!! You're so lively; I love it :D Well, coincedently, the last book I read was *drum roll* ...Inkdeath, and I found it surprisingly great, but unfortunately, you ...