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Re: Pretty words, Ugly reality
Thank you this poem is a work in progress and will change periodically. Thank you for your feed back, ~ Inked. :)
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: Pretty words, Ugly reality
Thank you I appreciate your feed back, and I have taken what you have said into consideration as you can see. ~Inked:)
Mar 1, 2015 -
Re: I Remember Then
You left words out so reread it and you can probably make the corrections yourself without me having to point them out. I font know if your planning to add ...
Feb 28, 2015 -
Re: The last carpenter
I agree with the punctuation comment, I believe that you could do with some imagery, and it doesn't hurt to put yourself in the story, feel the story. Make it ...
Feb 28, 2015 -
Re: Pretty words, Ugly reality
I'm sorry if this poem doesn't make sense I tried really hard to make it work.
Feb 28, 2015
