Incognito

I need help. What do you need help with? I'm Dreamwalk's sister and I know the concept quite well. I might be able to help.

And here is my Imp. Name: Titus, second name; Asmodeus Race: Imp Gender: Male Age: 18 Appearance: Titus is tall, around the height of 6"2. He has a medium build, ...

A/N: This is a bit of a lengthy piece, but breaking it into parts would take away the effect. This story is very tragic and upsetting, with explicit content (and ...

Ah, okay. You can keep this here for now, or if you want to, you can ask a Mod to move it for you. It sounds like a great concept. ...

I have to say, I really did like this piece. (: It has a great voice to it, and the dialogue is not static at all. I was very impressed ...

First off, I want to make a comment to affablearmadillo. You probably have had a hard day, doesnt mean you have to be so mean to the kid. Your comments ...

This is pretty good. I find it quite entertaining because it does connect with the superficial world of highschool. I have a couple things I want to pick out though. ...

Well to be frank, I didnt really enjoy this piece. You wrote it well, certainly, and it appears that everyone above caught all the nit-picks so I wont go through ...

This was a very passionate piece, I have to say that for sure. It was certainly tragic, and I am unsure really what to think of it. You have great ...

Would you happen to review my prologue? I need feedback. (: It is General Fiction, and it is right here; The Melancholy Tale of Darren Everrest . Its only a ...

Because you commented on my critique I felt like I should take a gander at some of your work. ;) And I have to say I was pleasantly surprised. You ...

I didnt like it. To be honest. I am not trying to be rude or anything. The common thread in your poem was this line; You left her standing Yes, ...

I did indeed enjoy that. I kind of liked the morbid feel of it and you did great with the atmosphere of the whole thing. Over all it appears to ...

Not to sound like a sap or anything, but this actually brought me to tears. I had much the same thing happen to me, though there was a few variances, ...

No offense, but my opinion of this piece is different then the others. I didn't really like it. You have excellent potential. I enjoyed the common thread through the storyline, ...