Incognito

Oh dear, is my promised application for this Storybook still available? I believe I have been too late... ~Incognito

I think Lizzifer, that you may be aboard The Siren which is now aboard The Wrath . Well, that is what I guessed from your last post. Which was like ...

Well, your critique is very much appreciated LaReina. I do not actually know when you wrote that but on the other hand, I understand what you mean about my descriptiveness. ...

I guess she does slightly look like a boy... That was a mess up by me. I am horrible at faces if I draw the body first. I am fairly ...

Nadira She staggered forward through the crowd, thoughts bledning into an unreadable mess in her mind. A war? That could not be. Soon she pulled out of the crowd and ...

Vashhan They were all bickering now, their words blending into one fluent thrum. He could not bear the noise any longer. He pitched to his knees and covered his ears ...

The Wrath~ Cervantes de Leon He felt the ship shudder into movement. They were going to be moving. They were going to be getting away from that murderous ship. He ...

The Wrath~ Cervantes de Leon Leon slipped across the small plank and onto his familiar ship quietly. He did not wish to be noticed. Mr. Collins would be coming back ...

And so here is my entrance! ----------------------------- Nadira And there she sat, a mixture of fear and anger running through her veins. For there she was in the centre of ...

The Wrath~ Cervantes de Leon "It is your fault the ship is burning! I hope you burn in Hell!" She roared at Leon but before he could make a comment ...

-- Sorry guys! I went away from for a little while, and I got banned from the computer! I am totally lost with this storybook, but do you think I ...

The Wrath/Siren~ Cervantes de Leon Leon stumbled backwards into the room and feel against a solid wooden table. he quickly straightened up and glared at the door. Wasn't this just ...

Hello! I will critique your piece today. You do not have to critique mine back. It has been posted for a long time and has plenty of enough reviews. You ...

I personally kept having trouble with my one novel that I have started. I had the story line perfectly played out in my head but there was no way to ...

I indeed thought this was great. In school we are working on Descriptive Writing again, and show, don't tell is a rule my teacher keeps on reminding us. This makes ...