Incognito

I'm mainly going to talk to you about your setting because Gryph got all the main plot holes down. Now I'm sure you know how vital a setting is and ...

I actually found this kind of epic in a way. It was easy to relate as a teenager with the intoxication. Now first off, I want to comment on your ...

It was horrible. (I'll review it later.)

I'll join. ;) Name: Tobias Timn Gender: Male Age Appears 24 Specialty: Inventing -- He can create new things on the spot, adapting to the materials he is given. Why ...

You are looking at writing in the wrong way. There is no technical wrong way to write unless it is through punctuation or grammar. You seem like you don't have ...

I have done NaNoWriMo twice. First time, I didn't complete the goal because I became too caught up with what I was writing. I had the whole story planned out ...

Freakforchrist.

I'll be Alix if you want me to. ;)

Bonjour mon ami! First off, I want to talk to you about your grammar. There was a few issues I found within it that you should work on. Many of ...

This'll be a short review, for I have not much effort to put into this, but I know you won't shut up until I do, so here I go. Overall, ...

Allo there. (: I'm Incognito and am going to review your story so far for you. Overall, I find it a very interesting concept. I am from a whole different ...

King Tarvos | The Asyran Keep; Consultation Parlor Relief flooded through him, replacing the feeling of anger and frustration. At last, he had it in his hands. Tarvos looked down ...

King Tarvos | The Asyran Keep; Consultation Parlor Tap. Tap. Tap. His fingers repetitively tapped on the desk as he looked at the pale faced officials around the room. Tarvos' ...

My character. I'm willing to make another character if you want me to too. I could be the other King. ;) Name: Tarvos Asyranis Age: 42 Gender: Male Race: Human ...

Titus "So, Lina. Nice place you got here," Titus said awkwardly. After Brady and Emma left, the room was left in silence. Lacey the other imp was quiet and didn't ...