Incognito

Just to let all of you know, because I thought maybe to get this Storybook to get going was that somebody might have needed an opening. Well I made an ...

Tobias ~ June 14th ~ 5:00 a.m. He tossed and turned, the sleep not settling in as it should. No matter how much he tried to sleep, it seemed impossible ...

Rayne, maybe you will actually be able to get the Storybook moving! xD I am going to bombard LaReina brutally tomorrow. I am waiting on her, and I believe it ...

Here are my characters. If there is something not right I will edit. ;3 ------------------------------ Name: Malik. Title: Lord Malik of Greed. Gender: Male. Age they look : 14 Appearance: ...

Thanks all of you for your reviews. They are incredibly helpful. ;3 I appreciate you taking your time to do this. ~Incognito

A/N: This here is part one for my entry in 'The Monster is Back' contest. I need you guys to rip it apart because I do have time to fix ...

When I write, my teacher always told us to use 'said' as little a possible and to try to find other words to replace it with. And I would do ...

Bolt, the only problem with that is because Ellie is there also and she would take care of Spencer, and let's just say Tobias doesn't get out much. He isn't ...

Tobias ~ Civilian ~ June 13th He sipped his coffee, eyes wide as he watched the multiple channels flip by on the screen madly, the light settling a pale blue ...

:/ Find whom? If you were talking about Tobias, I was thinking they could be looking into an apartment for which they could stay temporarily which just happened to be ...

Boltage, that could possibly work. And what we also can do is that while your character is in Tobias' apartment, he asks about a minor alteration, Tobias uses his Trace ...

One thing you have to be careful is that that is only the recent standard. All characters are the same, either they are like jesters, arrogant, quiet, or depressive. Characters ...

I believe there isn't actually such a thing as a true friend because everyone has a different opinion of what a true friend should be like. So that could possibly ...

;3 I am just actually trying to get my character into the story. xD

Telling and showing can also relate to info dumping which a lot of writers do on this site, and it can get unpleasant to read. When you tell, a lot ...