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Re: Chionophobia #10 /P
Clau-- Thanks for taking the time to read&respond. A loop diuretic is something that enhances renal function--no foul spelling at play. "lap" should be "lip"--good catch. I'm not sure I ...
Jan 4, 2007 -
Re: Chionophobia #10 /P
Removed.
Jan 4, 2007 -
Re: Chionophobia #9 /P
Removed.
Jan 4, 2007 -
Re: Chionophobia #8 /P
Removed.
Jan 4, 2007 -
Re: Chionophobia #7 /P
Removed.
Jan 3, 2007 -
Re: Chionophobia #6 /P
Removed.
Jan 2, 2007 -
Re: Brad Returns with Better Artwork (and more shame!)
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Jan 1, 2007 -
Re: This Was Beauty (When Women Wore Curves)
Fand - It's a one trick pony, and the trick isn't that great. Condesnse the last two strophes to one, drop the boring repetition, and you'll have a poem about ...
Jan 1, 2007 -
Re: Chionophobia #5 /P
Removed.
Jan 1, 2007 -
Re: Chionophobia #2 /P
Snoink: Thanks for your time and consideration. Since we already discussed this, I'll omit it from here. Colleen: Also thanks for reading and responding. Sadly, the patient is a knock-on-wood ...
Dec 31, 2006 -
Re: Chionophobia #4 /P
Removed.
Dec 31, 2006 -
Re: Chionophobia #3 /P
Removed.
Dec 30, 2006 -
Re: Lets get free
Seven, What's in plain sight is that your work is misplaced here. At the very minimum, poetry is expected to show us something--anything. To do less is to insult your ...
Dec 30, 2006 -
Re: Chionophobia #2 /P
Removed.
Dec 30, 2006 -
Re: Chionophobia #1 /P
Claudette: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and respond. This is actually part of the much larger Chionophobia story I am working on, which I will ...
Dec 30, 2006