Incandescence

TheEccentricScribe - This is the worst of the pieces you've posted in terms of establishing yourself as a poet. Your last couple of pieces are probing for a style, a ...

Seriena, This is five strophes longer than it should be. For this poem, there's a lot that can garner easy praise (relatability, tortuosity of love, etc--mind, it's all pretty boring), ...

broken-image, "Give me a chance and don't abandon me like the sane. I'm living a deadly life on the edge of destruction. To my limits i've been stretched and now ...

Krystalstars, You're showing very little, if any, progress with your writing. You continue to rely on gimmicks. As an example, the short lines in S4 don't merit the attention you ...

Fand. This is substantially worse than your previous efforts. There is very little here worth saving or editing. No matter what the inspiration, the poem must stand on its own. ...

Trident - This is, pardon the pun, dead on arrival. Part I is overall a collection of cliched elements, and Part II provides no resolution, but that's OK because you ...

Trident - I carried a garter snake through the whitewashed town: it would S and flick its thin forked tongue through scaled lips to seduce me. He could not bite. ...

Jig - Best, Brad

CaptinSix, You post here in full knowledge of the type of criticisms given. It is not un-understandable why some may stick to grammar in this case, because there isn't anything ...

Sorry, UberJimmy - This is a pathetic little reminiscence that goes no where. All the best, Brad

Trident - If Danielle dies, Jonathon, as her son's treating physician, by law becomes the temporary guardian of her child. This is her significance. Best, Brad

Removed.

I think it's funny we started with a record-high winter season, and are now in a record-low. Maybe, to reflect this wildly erratic behavior, you should put a picture of ...

bonafide-- re: "I know exactly what I am trying to communicate. It's lost in translation, which is to no other's fault but my own." Not knowing what to communicate and ...

Trident -- You have the right idea. Start from the top and work your way down. There's no reason to get hung with an agent/publisher less prestigious than your writing ...