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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shadows

    Nikiller - This fails for several reasons. 1. An overabundance of first-person references, much in the form of a diary entry. 2. Arbitrary linebreaks with an erratic rhyme-scheme. 3. Over-modified, ...

    Feb 24, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Crazy Me

    Tina - Did you hit your head before writing this? Seriously, do not add onto this. Deposit in a nearby trashbin before it contaminates your other work. In the meantime: ...

    Feb 24, 2007
  • Writing Tips Re: On Subjectivity in Poetry

    Hi guys, First, I'd like to acknowledge that we are all drawn to different styles of poetry in much the same way we are all drawn to different styles of ...

    Feb 24, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Missed Calls

    Cameron, I like the initial metaphor and it works okay as a conceit, but I'd watch throwing in the mosaic on top of the phone imagery: it kind of dilutes ...

    Feb 24, 2007
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: President Clinton?

    I bet if you pricked Obama's skin, he would ooze Hallmark cliches. As of now, I would vote for Romney. I don't like McCain, and Guiliani, I think, would basically ...

    Feb 23, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chionophobia #35 /P

    Removed.

    Feb 22, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chionophobia #34 /P

    Removed.

    Feb 22, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chionophobia #32 /P

    Ofour-- Just addressing the first question, I would say: doctors are (in the US) the highest paid individuals hands down. Just in Houston (my currrent city of residence), the average ...

    Feb 22, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chionophobia #33 /P

    Removed.

    Feb 22, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chionophobia #32 /P

    Removed.

    Feb 22, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: The Very Disgruntled Phorcys

    Phorcys, When you make grossly generalized claims like, "Incan has not been punished," you should at least make them on things where there's no proof one way or the other. ...

    Feb 21, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: The Very Disgruntled Phorcys

    Phorcys, You seem bent on digging yourself into a deeper hole, and to what end? There is nothing in this thread that might be reasonably supportive of such an inflammatory ...

    Feb 21, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: The Very Disgruntled Phorcys

    Phorcys - To wit, mods are selected on an increasingly variegated set of conditions. One of these considerations has always been and needs to be abuse of power. This means ...

    Feb 21, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: The Very Disgruntled Phorcys

    Phorcys -- This sort of impetuous posting is probably testament to why you were removed. If you can not live with the decisions made here, then you should leave--there are ...

    Feb 21, 2007
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chionophobia #31 /P

    Removed.

    Feb 20, 2007


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