Incandescence

All - Thanks for your thoughts and considerations. Jig: "random madness"? I guess if you consider religion "madness" (or, perhaps more interestingly, religion "random") then yeah, I agree about that. ...

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Clearly, Pat Buchanan has her. I mean, he hasn't won anything in his career, so why not just throw the old guy a bone?

Tina - This starts out pretty standard, but I think the sudden shift to the mother is compelling enough to save it from the clutches of amateur screenwriting. As Clau ...

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Rieda -- I'm still debating on posting more of this. Poor Imp - An unsolicited crit? Well, it must have been my lucky day. To address your question: the heavy ...

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Hi Jack, Here's the low-down. Things in [blahblahblah] should be removed. Things in (blahblahblah) should be added. Things in blahblahblah should be reconsidered/rephrased. * denotes an in-line commen

Mesh and Crysi: For sure.

Syllabic Count: 10 10 11 10 10 11 10 10 11 *This pattern gives it a lullaby-like tone. 10 10 9 *This breaks the lullaby pattern and suggests shortness, cuts ...

Mailed off the manuscript to Ms. Becker. She said max turnaround time should be 72 hours. Today I queried scifi agent Jenny Rappaport of the J. L. Perkins Agency (formerly ...

This is incredibly stupid and what happens when people get so wrapped up in any one belief system that they're blinded to reason. They say it is humiliating for Knut, ...

Some feedback already. Here are the replies: First the bad: March 18, 2007 Dear Author: Thank you so much for sending the Nelson Literary Agency your query. We’d like to ...

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