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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Some Sort of Complication. chpt 2.

    Penguin-- You have done a lovely job in these two chapters of setting up Mella's and Daryl's relationship: there's a strong sadistic element that is at once frightening and endearing. ...

    Oct 11, 2008
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  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: The Great Depression II?

    Snoink, The fear is that extreme liquidity of the "real" economy will happen if the credit-based economy doesn't stabilize (through government intervention). "Liquidity" is a fancy way of saying that ...

    Sep 30, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Battle for the White House

    PC, I addressed what I believe to be most of the issues you raised in the thread for economic policy (sorry if I missed any; let me know). Best, Brad

    Sep 20, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Obama vs. McCain in Economic Policy

    Well, Sam, I disagree with most of your points. First off, taxes aren't meant to punish people for doing things: they're meant to convey information about the state and national ...

    Sep 20, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: September

    Cade, The first line of your poem can be absorbed into the title: e.g. A silent film in September. Small poems tend not to resonate with audiences for a lot ...

    Sep 19, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Battle for the White House

    Palin isn't going to implode. The bank situation is the direct result of the regulations that McCain and other conservatives voted against. Regulations that forced them to give mortgages to ...

    Sep 19, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Musings on the less fortunate

    Bob, I'm not sure this is poetry. It seems more like a prolonged aphorism than a sustained engagement with metaphor, metonymy, etc. It's a group of descriptions that don't rise ...

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Armchair Poet

    Smorg - "Suffered accordingly" is horrific as a sonic. Listen to it: "Suffered" flows smoothly and then is abruptly cut off by the hard "ed." You then introduce a hard ...

    Sep 17, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Armchair Poet

    Smorg, There's an idea worth pursuing here, but the current structure is completely opposed to the rueful wryness you've written with. The machine gun lines certainly don't help, and particular ...

    Sep 16, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Battle for the White House

    The choice of Sarah Palin is a sign of the times. In politics, the feminine enunciation is hence called to dominate (Everywhere we see a call for strong, dominating women). ...

    Sep 14, 2008
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: A Rapist's View of the World: Joss Whedon and Firefly

    Feminists need to understand there's a difference in sexual discrimination and willfully submitting to objectification a la TV shows and pornography. Even if her analysis is correct--I'm not saying it

    Sep 9, 2008


I will call them my people, which were not my people; and her beloved, which was not beloved.
— Romans 9:25